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CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR WARRIORS: BLUESTAR'S PROPHECY"That's my brother."
Crookedpaw's mew suprised Bluepaw.
"Who?"
"Oakheart." Crookedpaw explained, "He's my littermate." Bluepaw stretched up on her hind legs to get a better view of the tom, but could see only the reddish-brown tips of his ears.
"He's great," Crookedpaw purred. "He caught a fish on his first day as an apprentice."
I caught a squirrel. Bluepaw found herself competing.
"He says that when he becomes leader, he'll make me deputy."
How modest! "I have a sister," Bluepaw announced. She nodded toward Snowpaw, who was sitting beside Sparrowpelt, a tail-length away. "She's a brilliant hunter too."
"Maybe if they both become leader, we could be deputies together," Crookedpaw mewed.
Deputy? What was the point of being deputy? "I want to be the leader!"
Crookedpaw looked at her in surprise, then broke into a purr. "Of course."~Bluestar's Prophecy, Page 165
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Improvement? I think so!
Please critque!
And what do you guys think of the new eye style? O3O
Enjoy!
~Wavey~
Crookedpaw and Bluepaw (C) Erin Hunter
Warrior Cats (C) Erin Hunter
I DO NOT OWN WARRIOR CATS!!!
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Technique ImpactYou're a good artist, but you defenitely need to work on a few things. When cats open their mouths, the skin draws forward, making the mouth opening smaller. The skin doesn't stay back like that. Also, when the mouths are closed, the mouth doesn't curve so drastically. It's a subtle plate-bottom shape. Moving on, the ears of a cat have fur inside, and should have the rim showing on all sides. The fur is okay, but you could make the fur outline finer along the edges. A thinner line. Cats do not have hair flopping in front of their faces. PLEASE fix that. It's a lot of people's pet peeve to see hair like that on a cat. The top of the head is the smoothest part of the cat's body apart from the ears, back, and tail. Cat legs are very thin. You should probably do a little bit of anatomy studying. Finally, moonlight is not struck through with random lines of darkness, nor does the moon shine beams. Moonlight is constant, like sunlight. That's all.
-Tam